It Was a Cute Story, But...

A Family Affair - Mary Campisi

The sex scenes were laughable. From what I have experienced and understand of sex, a man can't just plunge into a woman with only a kiss or two beforehand unless he wants the woman in question to scream and bash him in the head.

 

Additionally, the constant aspect involving the characters' asking each other if they believed in god was a little ridiculous. I don't think anyone really asks other people that question outside of proselytizing.