The Sight - Erin Hunter The story was better than the last series, but still not as good as the original series. Jaypaw is really grumpy and rude; Hollypaw is relatable in the sense that she wants to be something that she's not good at and Lionpaw is just sort of...there. I hope the series gets better; I like the fact that it was longer than previous books, and the story has a lot of potential.